Out of the Dark
I mentioned that I had been struggling with a sketch of my main character, Penn Darvel. I drew something up at work today, and think that it is better than what I have now. I am still not 100% pleased, but I believe it is a step in the right direction. Tell me what you think, please.
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Is it my turn yet?
February 28, 2013 at 1:15 am
He looks a little famished(looking at the midsection here). Perhaps he’s just think, but then his shoulders are a tad wider than they should look. Much better than anything I can draw though.
Keep at it, I’m sure you’ll be pleased with the results soon enough.
Len
February 28, 2013 at 8:40 am
Yeah he is awfully thin. I usually draw stronger characters so my default is broad shoulders. Thanks for reading, and for your feedback.
Is it my turn yet?
February 28, 2013 at 1:16 am
*Thin, not think…haha.
storytellerdavis
February 28, 2013 at 9:01 am
Still looks better than I could do. Maybe I should start trying.
Len
February 28, 2013 at 9:47 am
Helps break up the writing, and I have come up with some neat ideas while sketching out my characters as well.
Trinh
February 28, 2013 at 11:27 am
I think you meant to say, “When I was off the clock, on my lunch, I drew something.” Haha
Len
February 28, 2013 at 11:31 am
Yeah, on my break! That’s it! Break
corwel87
February 28, 2013 at 11:25 pm
haa
I think when your in a heated box watching dials for endless hours and having a job no one else wants to do or do as well as you.. you deserve to draw ! lol
Len
March 1, 2013 at 8:16 am
Thanks! Still no one knows how to do it.
whyorick
March 1, 2013 at 12:49 am
I like it.
I would agree on the midsection, as well as it looks a bit… to wrinkly.
Also the hands a a bit big, but could be overlooked.
Otherwise it is great and I textually applaud it!
Len
March 1, 2013 at 8:18 am
Thank you! I agree that the middle got funny on me.